54 word story, “She”

The tone of her voice struck me, the way she took command over the language. I sucked in my breath and sauntered across the room, her icy stare penetrating my domineering facade. Bending to sit, she unleashed a shriek of astonishment, I jumped in awe. “I think my dog likes you, John.” “yeah, right.”

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